Writing Task 2 (Argument Led)
The majority assume that the gym’s improvement will be the ideal strategy to scale up health quality of the society. On the contrary, some believes that it may lead to the drawback and another negative impacts. I will discuss both views and give my own opinion.
On the one hand, gym’s facilities may encourage those who are too lazy to work out in leisure time. If people stayed in their home and have less activities, it would bring them to the vulnerable diseases, either mentally or physically. As consequence, the health services, such as hospital, will be collapsed in the long term. It can also spread the ideal healthy life style’s campaign to be as cool as cucumber through the work out and how to pull through in the future condition. For instance, if the government provide a lot of sport facilities, people will assume that the best way to relax is going to work out since it is reachable.
On the other hand, providing health services in many spots of the region will cause some consequences if it is not supervised by the expert. People who don’t follow the instructions will gain inevitable incident. As a result, it may increase load cases in the hospital which also can be collapsed. Besides, vandalism is one of familiar issues if people do not know how to operate certain thing. As consequence, government’s efforts to improve health rate in the region will be nonsense.
Allocating budget to improve health facilities may be a good choice as long as it can be used by the people consciously that health medium should be taken care together and follow the instruction.
